Screenplay draft 3

wild wolf productions goes to black screen

o.s voice  what are you doing  dirty little bugger get

out off my shop I'm calling the police get

  out leave me

Establishing shot of an off licence door swings open and a young lad runs through the door this lad is a lad know as Chalky (real name James smith named Chalky by friends and other gang members).Chalky is a white boy dressed as a local boy . He is wearing low batty jeans (jeans hanging round his bum), trainers and a hoody . Chalky always manages to get out of scrapes. Also always arguing with mum about different thing his mum is worried about him.

Slow motion of Chalky running down the street dropping mars bars which he has just stolen from the shop he has arms full of beer cans and mars bars he has just stolen from the off licence low angle tracking shot. 

Chalky: this is me, this is me doing what i do best ,

its like an addiction, once its started you cant stop you crave it, 

the more you crave it the more you want it  the more you want it the 

more trouble it causes you, its not as easy as it looks always 

on the run from the coppers always having to look over your 

shoulder it gives you a thrill like no drug ever could, 

it get you buzzing gives you an Adrenalin rush 

Chalky runs into a lamp post, gets knocked clean out, lies on the floor and doesn't move.

 Crosscuts to police officer running down a road a different road to were Chalky just run down.  

Police officer: I'm in pursuit of the suspect heading down gale street 

keeps running down the street 

from the eyes of Chalky 

Blinking coming round 

shot of police officer looking down 

fuzzy screen, fade to black fuzzy screen,

 fade to less fuzzy screen, fade to black normal vision 

to show different states of him coming round.

High angle shot of the police officer standing 

over Chalky looking down at him. Chalky tries to get up and

 run but he's unable to get up as he is still dazed. 

Police officer :and were do you think your going sunshine 

Montage of doors opening and shutting car door then gate the random door then interview room door buzzing every door apart from car 

shot of both police officer and chalky sitting in an interview room 

Police officer: so chalky this is what the 3rd time this week. 

Chalky:no its not my fat you see what happened was. 

Police officer: i don't want to hear it (looking through notes)  your 

just like your farther excuse after excuse look where it got him.

getting angry 

Chalky: I'm nothing like my father. 

Police officer: i remember when your father used to do what you 

do your just like him like father like son  (laughs)

Flash back of Chalky's father holding a baby, then gets pulled away by police officers who appear on screen. They disappear to a bright flash.  

Chalky wipes his arm across the desk making everything fall off on to the floor 

through gritted teeth 

Chalky: I'm nothing like him  

Chalky clenches his fist, 

swings for the police officer. The officer ducks out of the way and pushes a button under the table. 3 officers rush in and pin Chalky to the floor.

Chalky voice over : bad mistake, i thought

i wanted it, well i thought i did. 

Flashes live by the street die by the street titles and credits