Screenplay draft 2

 wild wolf productions goes to black screen

 off screen voice: what are you doing  dirty little bugger get

                                                     out off my shop I'm calling the police get

                                                     out leave me

We will have an establishing shot of an off licence shop. The doors will swings open and a young guy will run through the doors. This guy better know as Chalky. Chalky is a local boy who lives in East london in the area Dagenham. Chalky will be wearing clothes like hoodies, trainers and batty jeans. Chalky is always arguing with mum about different thing his mum and they find it hard to get along after his dad went to prison.

There will be a slow motion of chalky as he runs down the street he will be dropping mars bars (chocolate). he will have his arms full with beers and mars bars he has just stolen from the off licence low angle tracking shot. 

Chalky: this is me, this is me doing what i do best ,its like an addiction, once its started you cant stop you crave it, the more you crave it the more you want it  the more you want it the more trouble it causes you, its not as easy as it looks always on the run from the coppers always having to look over your shoulder it gives you a thrill like no drug ever could, it get you buzzing gives you an Adrenalin rush 

runs into a lamppost get knocked clean out lies on the floor and don't move

 crosscuts to police officer running down a road a different road to were chalky just run down  

police officer: I'm in pursuit of the suspect heading down gale street 

keeps running down the street 

from the eyes off the chalky 

blinking coming round 

shot of police office looking down 

fuzzy fade to black fuzzy fade to black less fuzzy fade to black normal vision 

police office standing over chalky looking down 

chalky trys to get up and run 

police officer :and were do you think your going sunshine 

Montague of doors opening and shutting car door then gate the random door then interview room door buzzing every door apart from car 

shot of both police officer and chalky sitting in an interview room 

police officer: so chalky this is what the 3rd time this week 

chalky:no its not my falt you see what happened was 

police officer: i don't want to hear it (looking through notes)  your just like your farther excuse after excuse look were it got him

getting angry 

chalky: I'm nothing like my Father 

police officer: i remember when your Father used to do what you do your just like him like Father like son  (laughs)

chalky wipes his arm across the desk making everything fall off on to the floor 

through gritted teeth 

chalky: I'm nothing like him  

clenches fist 

swings for the police office, Office pushes button under the table 3 officers rush in and pin him to the floor 

chalky voice over : bad mistake 

flashes live by the street die by the street titles credits 

Screenplay: Live By The Street Die By The Street!!!

Music: by Temper T –"Next Hype" This song will be playing at the beginning of the opening sequence when the character chalky is running down the street out of the shop we stole from. This song has been used in a film of a similar genre to what we are doing as we (Shank) so this we help to set to tone and atmosphere of the film and will make the genre of the film easy to recognise

  o.s voice  what are you doing  dirty little bugger get
  out off my shop im calling the police get 
  out leave me  (voice over)
There will be an establishing shot of the shop the doors will swings open as Chalky a young white skinny boy will run through them .to also help give of the feeling of a crime, gangster film we will have chalky dressed in hoodies, low batty jeans and gangster clothing’s so that it can fit in with the genre of the film.

when chalky slow motion of chalky running down the street dropping mars bars which he has just stolen from the shop he has arms full beer and mars bars he has just stolen from the off licence low angle tracking shot. Mid shot gets to a corner runs round the corner to meet his mate. the song that was playing at the start is now playing on chalky’s friends phone both character do a devised hand shake

Chalky:yh boy i got us some mars bars fosters

init bruv that guy is bare stupid

Rascle: bruv you and your fucking mars bars your bare

fat and allow him man you rob him everyday

We will have a mid shoot for this part

Rascle is another white boy how is over weight also dressed up similar to chalky. Rascle is chalky's best friend there is one main difference between rascle and chalky that is that rascle always get caught because he cant run because of his weight.

Chalky: bruv me fat have you seen yourself

oh no wait you cant fit in the mirror

(Chalky laughs at his own joke )

Rascle and Chalky both open a can of beer see the can opening then close up of  Rascle/Chalky drinking it mid shot flat angle

chalky always is talking about him and his mums problems as him and his mum find it difficult to get along

Chalky: my mums a bitch.she kicked me out the other

night because the feds busted down my

mums door for me summink to do with

some next gang called the hoodwinked or

summink i told her i aint got nout to do with

it but she dont believe me .

Rascle: bruv dont say that about your mum you gotta love

your mum init and just give her time im sure shell

come round and whos this hoodwink ting

Chalky:have you met my mum and na bruv shes being bare otters

( Rascle nods asif to say he understands long shot low angle )

Rascle: anyways bruv i pulled this bird lovely she is i met 

her in spearmint rihano she was grinding on

me like this (shows how she was grinding on him )

and i was grinding on her like this bruv it was

well good been texting her she well onit

shes gagging for me thats what 56 this

year alone

Chalky: bruv you gotta learn to respect girls this is the

6th just this month you gotta sort it out

Rascle:at least i can get em unlike you

Chalky: bruv one day im gonna rule these streets and

have a proper bird one with big knockers 

(Rascle snickers and chops on a mars bar)

then will see who will be laughing

 Rascle:come lets go the park and drink what we got

both walk off down the street bumping arms and laughing really hard long shot

o.s: oit get back here

both look behind and then run for their lives then to black screen

Treatment Rewrite

Film title: Live By The Street, Die By The Street

Main characters:  Chalky & Rascal

A Wild Wolf Production

Storyline
Chalky is a local white boy who gets himself involved in the wrong crowd. Chalky starts to get himself involved in crimes at first he start of with petty crimes e.g. stealing from shops (shoplifting) and just being a general nuisance the story unfolds we see gradually see chalky progress from a small time offer to a fully fledge criminal. Chalky gets himself involved in even more heaver crimes and his mums begin to get worried about him. But every thing chances when he meets a girl. However this girl turns out to be an undercover police bent on bring justice back on the street by bring down the criminals. But Chalky doesn't know this piece of information and is unaware of her true purpose and her plan to betray him. Unfortunately the under cover cop dies during a feud with some gangs leaving chalky broken hearted so this makes him go on a revenge mission to get revenge on the person who killed is love. Unfortunately for chalky it all goes horribly wrong and chalky ends up dieing as well on the streets.

The Opening sequence
Our 2 minutes opening sequence will be showing the main characters Chalky and his best friend Rascal. First the will be a black out in the beginning of opening sequence and then it will go straight in to the footage, The first thing we well hear is a shop keeper shouting "What are you doing, come back here you dirty beggar" and then we will see an establishing shot of a shop from the shop we will see a young person running out of the store carrying bars of chocolate (mars bar) and a couple of drink his arms will be filled up with so many stolen goods that his going to be dropping them as his running a way from the shop. As he is running the will be a slow motion showing him running away from the store and him dropping some objects one by one then it will go back in to a fast past as he escapes the shop and the shopkeeper and he will go to a flat building (the Lego Tower) to meet this best friend Rascal how is a fat, chubby guy and he will sit down with him sharing the food and the drink chalky stole and talking about their day. We will also have a fast past gangster/ crime style music playing in background of the opening sequence so that the audience can easily identify was type of genre of film their watching and we will have a voice over of the chalky telling us his story of how he died later in the opening sequence and in the film and at the beginning when the shopkeeper is shouting at him we will have a voice over for that as well. We have also decided to have the characters wear costumes such as hoodies and track suites to make the film even more identifiable and to help create the scene and atmosphere of a crime driving community. We well use camera angles such as low shoot angle and high shoot angle, close ups and we will be using a lot of flat shoot angle as well.